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I had alwyas been fond of Janessa. She was one of the hottest girls in shcool. I thought so anyways. She was tall, almost 6 feet. That was taller than most any other girl in school. She had long, flowing black hair, long y legs, and an incredible ***. She alwyas dressed in dark clothes. and wore dark mascara. She would fit in with the emos or the goths but instead she hung around with the other hot girls. She didn't talk to or even notice guys like me because she was too popular. Janessa also had this dark side about her. One day at school she came in and she looked really aggitated. Janessa was storming through the hallway stomping loudly. Today she was wearing a black top and a black skirt along with fishnet stockings and beautiful black boots. The boots were platform with a 4'' chunky heel. They were knee high with laces on the front and side zippers. Janessa alwyas wore this ankle bracelet around her left boot but it was not visible today as her boots were covered in mud. As she stormed by she bumped the shoulder of this short kid beside me. She didnt stop or say sorry or nothing. She just kept storming down the hallway. I didnt think that shorty was going to say anything as he kind of looked like a push over. But sure enough he yelled "What the **** is your problen ya ******* hooker!!". Then Janessa came to a dead stop. She turned around and asked him "What the **** did you just say to me? Who in the **** do you think you are? Do you even know who in the **** I am?" Then Janessa stormed over to him and stood in front of him nd towered over him. She didnt say anything. Janessa just stood there playing with her lip ring with her tounge. She then got this erie little smile and said to him "You are ******" Then janessa walked away. A couple of minuets later the whole school shook. BANG BANG BANG CRASH The school roof blew into a million pieces. I looked up to see this gigantic mud caked boot with an ankle bracelet around it sticking thru the roof of the school. It was Janessas boot. I looked further up to see Janessa looking down and laughing. She must have been around 60ft tall. Everyone was running and screaming. Just then Janessa withdrew her huge platform boot from the roof. Then another crash. Her boot came flying thru the wall. Janessa was laughing even harder. Then she bent down and picked up somthing. I looked to see it was that short kid. Janessa held him right in front of her face and told him that he was to clean her boots off an lick them. She set the kid down at the toe of her beautiful gigantic boot and yelled "CLEAN!" Most of the mud had fallen off except for the stuff caked in her laces and rings. Instead of mud there was now chunks of our school stuck in the rubber sole of her boots. I was probably the only person who was not fleeing the school. I was fascinated by the beauty and power that her gigantic platform held. The tops were still clean and so shindy that i could see light reflecting off of them. She obviousl kept them clean and polished. She looked at me while shorty was cleaning her boots franticly. She then bent over and piked me up. As Janessa was looking at me that short kid ran off. She yelled "You cant run forever. I'll find you!" With me in her hand she ran after shorty. She saw hm running thru the field. Her huge shadow blacked out the whole field. That short kid knew she was coming. Her gigantic platforms pounded the ground hard. She then picked up her leg and stomped dowm right in front of her victim. He fell right on his *** infront of the towering gothic boot. Then Janessa took me and tied me up in the laces of her boot and said " If you like to stare at my boots so much you can just stay there. I'll deal with you later." Then Janessa pressed her huge heel down onto shortys legs crushing them. He yelled out in pain. Janessa picked him up agian and said to him "You wont be running anywhere anymore" then she laughed. He was bleeding to death dripping blood all over janessas boots. She didnt notice. Janessa then began to walk back towards the school. People were still fleeing and emergency vechicles began flocking towards the smashed school. Janessa then threw shorty to the ground and stepped on him. You could hear the bones crunch in the treads of her boots as she twisted him in like a discarded cigarette . Janessa then began smashing everything within her sight. Cars, trucks, emergency vechicles, nearby houses. She used her boots as a killing tool utilizing every aspect of them. Heel, toe, hell i was even a prisioner in her laces. She just kept stepping on stuff and smashing stuff with her beautiful boots until she grew tired. There was just scilence now as she had crushed everything within her sight. No more sirens, no more screams, just scilence. Jaessa looked back at her path of destruction. There was twisted metal and building debris everywhere. Where there once stood a school was now nothing more than a concrete pad. There were bodies of her helpless victim