Friday, January 6, 2012

Do you have any constructive critisism for my poem?

I think it's really good. I think if you had a different title, so that it could mean something different for everyone else, that would make it better. Something like "Forced Connection". When I read it I felt like the narrator was being forced into a connection they didn't want to be in. I thought it was really good and you should keep it up!

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